--- a/docs/installation_iis.rst	Fri Aug 14 17:21:26 2015 +0200
+++ b/docs/installation_iis.rst	Tue Aug 18 11:47:19 2015 +0200
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 Installation
 ------------
 
-The following will assume that your Kallithea is at ``c:\inetpub\kallithea`` and
+The following assumes that your Kallithea is at ``c:\inetpub\kallithea``, and
 will be served from the root of its own website. The changes to serve it in its
 own virtual folder will be noted where appropriate.
 
@@ -32,15 +32,15 @@
 with an identity that has read access to the Kallithea distribution.
 
 The application pool does not need to be able to run any managed code. If you
-are using a 32-bit Python installation, then you must enable 32 bit program in
-the advanced settings for the application pool otherwise Python will not be able
-to run on the website and consequently, Kallithea will not be able to run.
+are using a 32-bit Python installation, then you must enable 32-bit program in
+the advanced settings for the application pool; otherwise Python will not be able
+to run on the website and neither will Kallithea.
 
 .. note::
 
-    The application pool can be the same as an existing application pool as long
-    as the requirements to Kallithea are enabled by the existing application
-    pool.
+    The application pool can be the same as an existing application pool,
+    as long as the Kallithea requirements are met by the existing pool.
+
 
 ISAPI handler
 .............