--- a/docs/usage/statistics.rst	Sat Feb 26 17:49:52 2011 +0100
+++ b/docs/usage/statistics.rst	Sat Feb 26 23:40:55 2011 +0100
@@ -4,29 +4,30 @@
 Statistics
 ==========
 
-RhodeCode statistics system is heavy on resources, so in order to keep a 
-balance between the usability and performance statistics are cached inside db
-and are gathered incrementally, this is how RhodeCode does this:
+The RhodeCode statistics system makes heavy demands of the server resources, so
+in order to keep a balance between usability and performance, the statistics are
+cached inside db and are gathered incrementally, this is how RhodeCode does
+this:
 
 With Celery disabled
 ++++++++++++++++++++
 
-- on each first visit on summary page a set of 250 commits are parsed and
-  updates statistics cache
-- this happens on each single visit of statistics page until all commits are
-  fetched. Statistics are kept cached until some more commits are added to
-  repository, in such case RhodeCode will fetch only the ones added and will
-  update it's cache.
+- On each first visit to the summary page a set of 250 commits are parsed and
+  updates statistics cache.
+- This happens on each single visit to the statistics page until all commits are
+  fetched. Statistics are kept cached until additional commits are added to the
+  repository. In such a case RhodeCode will only fetch the new commits when
+  updating it's cache.
 
 
 With Celery enabled
 +++++++++++++++++++
 
-- on first visit on summary page RhodeCode will create task that will execute
-  on celery workers, that will gather all stats until all commits are parsed,
-  each task will parse 250 commits, and run next task to parse next 250 
-  commits, until all are parsed.
+- On the first visit to the summary page RhodeCode will create tasks that will
+  execute on celery workers. This task will gather all of the stats until all
+  commits are parsed, each task will parse 250 commits, and run the next task to
+  parse next 250 commits, until all of the commits are parsed.
 
 .. note::
-   In any time You can disable statistics on each repository in repository edit
-   form in admin panel, just uncheck the statistics checkbox.
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+   At any time you can disable statistics on each repository via the repository
+   edit form in the admin panel. To do this just uncheck the statistics checkbox.